This time I felt the peer review session was extremely helpful. My editor pointed out to the various sections of my essay where I could have focused on a particular point or made the story more interesting. He also told me where I could cut out excessive description and detail which doesn't support my claim.
Nevertheless, I felt that reading my editors paper helped me more since I felt that his essay truly embodied the narrative essay. It taught me how to make dialogue an essential part of the argument. His paper also showed me how to tactfully include a message without being obvious.
Nevertheless, I felt that reading my editors paper helped me more since I felt that his essay truly embodied the narrative essay. It taught me how to make dialogue an essential part of the argument. His paper also showed me how to tactfully include a message without being obvious.
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